Saturday, 15 November 2014

Amended Narrative

1.Riley's on her bed at home, looking at herself in the mirror
2.Riley talks to Phoenix about feeling watched
3.Phoenix persuades Riley to attend a party
4.Riley argues, she doesn't want to attend the party - typical aspects of the final girl theory (innocent, doesn't drink)
5.Phoenix finally persuades Riley to attend the party and they go
6.Loki attempts to touch Riley in a sexual manner, this is seen by a bystander who knows Loki and Phoenix are a couple
7.The bystander tells Phoenix, and Phoenix then believes Riley is out to ruin her relationship with Loki
8.Riley and Phoenix go home, and while Phoenix is busy in the bathroom - Riley notices a shrine of herself under the bed (in Loki and Phoenix's house)
9.Riley thinks Loki is to blame for the shrine and the owner it
10.Riley runs out of the house, she manages to drop her house keys and Phoenix realises Riley has discovered the shrine under her bed
11.It's a new day
12.Riley "you need to look under the bed! I think Loki's obssessed with me"
Phoenix "what are you going on about?!"
Riley "what are you going on about?!"
13.Phoenix turns to look at Loki who is lying down on the bed with her, and the audience feels as though Loki is the guilty one because of her menacing store
14. Flashback? - past interaction
Riley and Loki were together earlier on in the year
Phoenix manages to distract Loki from her and that is how they begin their relationship
Phoenix' paranoia sets in, because of this event and therefore she is always wary of Riley - this is why they become best friends, so that Riley has no reason to go after Loki

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